各位网友们给分析个英文语句

从心里喜欢你.
like you are from the heart 是病句.
like在这里应该是动词,而不是介词.
所以应该是（I）like you from the heart.
在你面前,不想隐瞒对你的爱,但是又害怕失去.
In front of you do not want to hide,but afraid to lose.
是病句.缺主语
改为：
In front of you,I do not want to hide,but afraid to lose.
Because the kind of deep love.因为这深深的爱.
这句也有语病,
because后面跟的的是一个完整的句子.
because of 后面才可以加单个意思的片语.