看看有什么病句I have a happy family.The family has four members.Hav

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看看有什么病句
I have a happy family.The family has four members.Have my father,my mother and I.We live in yangjiang.My father is an engineer.His 38 years old.He often do car to go to work.He is kind.My mother is a housewife.Her 35 years old.My mother is very beautiful.She likes to climb mountains.I am a middle school student,I was YangDong experimental schools.I'm 14 years old.I also like to climb mountains.On weekends,we often go mountain climbing.This is my family.I love my family.
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首先四口人的四不能分开写,还有明明四个人,你只写了三个人.成员后的句号改为都好同时后面的“有”这个字要去掉,形成同位语.他是多少岁不是他的岁.你个别主谓一致也用的不对,时态也有用的不对的地方.错误太多,建议多检查
再问: 我这是从网上翻译的,能帮我整篇该过抄下来吗
再答: I have a happy family with three members,my father, my mother and I. We live in yangjiang. My father is an engineer. He is 38 years old. He often goes to work by car. He is kind. My mother is a housewife. She is 35 years old. My mother is very beautiful. She likes to climb mountains. I am a middle school student, I'm YangDong experimental school student. I'm 14 years old. I also like to climb mountains. On weekends, we often go to mountain to climb. This is my family. I love my family.
 
 
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