【英语50词作文】本人初一水平请帮我看看哪里还要改的,

很厉害啊!
My ideal school
【every one has his own ideal school ,so do i 】(每个人都有他理想中的学校,我也一样）I would like to study in a more beautiful place, although our school is good.
【first of all】（首先）I hope that there will be more air-conditioned rooms in our school.
We won’t be very hot in summer.
【in my mind ,it's really cool to swim in p.e class ,that's why 】 I also 【hope】（小的才疏学浅,但感觉用hope更顺口 = =） we can have a swimming pool in our school. （我认为,在体育课上游泳很爽,这就是我希望能有游泳池的原因）
【in a word 】（总而言之）This is my ideal school, do you like it?