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题目是剑9,TEST1如图.马上就要考了啊.
The maps visually reveal the changes of an island,before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
On the top of this,this island surrounded by sea is approximately 250 meters wide.And before the constructions brought in,the island had been entirely vacant except some trees existed dispersedly.However,after numerous buildings established,an upheaval appears.
There are two accommodation zone in the east and west part of island currently,an noticeable point to note is in the east residential zone,a footpath heads to the beach and swimming area is done therefore it must be more convenient for tourists who desired to go to the beach and swim. Besides,in the center of the island a restaurant and reception can be easily found.Furthermore,in the north of the island,a fascinating pier is built which considerably creates opportunities for come-and-go.
In addition,some vehicle tracks also have been established in order to connect the pier and the center area where the restaurant and reception located.
题目是剑9,TEST1如图.马上就要考了啊.
The maps visually reveal the changes of an island,before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
On the top of this,this island surrounded by sea is approximately 250 meters wide.And before the constructions brought in,the island had been entirely vacant except some trees existed dispersedly.However,after numerous buildings established,an upheaval appears.
There are two accommodation zone in the east and west part of island currently,an noticeable point to note is in the east residential zone,a footpath heads to the beach and swimming area is done therefore it must be more convenient for tourists who desired to go to the beach and swim. Besides,in the center of the island a restaurant and reception can be easily found.Furthermore,in the north of the island,a fascinating pier is built which considerably creates opportunities for come-and-go.
In addition,some vehicle tracks also have been established in order to connect the pier and the center area where the restaurant and reception located.
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