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My National Day
I had a very happy National Day!The National Day is my country's brithday.I feit very proud and proud.On the National Day.My parents and I went to the Purple Ma Ling Park .There are many people.There is very beautiful and very fun.In the morning.My parents and I played game and had a picnic.In the afternoon,we bought a China flag.In the end,we saw a film,the film is very wonderful!We were very happy!
This is my National Day!
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后面不是用的过去时吧,was were之类的
再问: 对哦,谢谢!没有别的了吧
 
 
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