求高人指导批改英语作文.

　　Difficulties in learning English
　　As we all know,English is more and more 【popular】 in our life,and most of us are learning English nowadays.But English is not easy 【while studying】.
　　I have studied English for more than ten years,【what's】 the biggest problem in my study is listening,【just】 because I rarely have the opportunities to listen to the 【traditional】 English.In the past 【few years】,we 【always write and write】,so it 【】resulted in my poor English listening.What's more,I have difficulty in speaking English,the reason【】 is that we usually talk in English with our classmates and teachers who could understand us even though we couldn't 【speak fluently】.However,foreigners may not understand the English we speak【】.But now,I think I have found some 【useful】 ways to solve these 【difficulties】,and my teacher and classmates can help me with my English.
　　In a word,I hope I could overcome these difficulties 【in】 my four-year university 【life】,and I 【could】 【have】 great progress in 【other ways about】 English.
　　【改以后的】
　　Difficulties in learning English
　　As we all know,English is more and more common used in our life,and most of us are learning English nowadays.But English is not easy to study actually.
　　I have studied English for more than ten years,there are still some difficulties.The biggest problem in my study is listening,that's because I rarely have the opportunities to listen to the idiomatic English.In the past,we always value the skill of writing and ignore other abilities,so it has resulted in my poor English listening.What's more,I have difficulty in speaking English,the reason why is that we usually talk in English with our classmates and teachers who can still understand us even though we couldn't make it clear.However,foreigners may not understand the English we speak as it may a little bit “Chingish”.But now,I think I have found some effective ways to solve these problems,and my teacher and classmates can also help me with my English.
　　In a word,I hope I could overcome these difficulties during my four-year university school life,and I am sure that I will make great progress in English.
祝好!
　　【来自英语牛人团】