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If I leave home,I'll miss my violin the most because my mom gave it to me as a birthday gift when I was 7 years old.That violin isn't just a present for the close relationship I have with my mom,rather it has a significant influence on my mind.My mom not only gave me a lot of suggestions on how to play violin professionally,but also told me how to appreciate art sincerely.Her conception has helped me overcoming many difficulties and I finally could catch the essence of beauty after putting into my heart.Music has changed my life entirely and I will dedicate all my spirit to the fascinating dream of music.