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My Home Village
My home village is a small one.It’s in Yuxian county of Shanxi Province.Small as it is,it’s very beautiful.
There are many hills around my home village and they are more beautiful than some big mountains.In spring,we can fly kites which are made by ourselves on the top of the hills.The kites fly very high.In summer,the trees are green and the grass is green,too.It is green everywhere on the hills.There are so many wild apple trees on the hills.The wild apples are nice to eat.In autumn,the corns under and around the hills are ripe.So we eat them almost every day.In winter,when it snows,all the ground is covered with snow.We can play with snow and sometimes we eat the clean snow with sugar.In my hometown the sky is blue,the air is clean,the water is sweet and the people are very friendly.I love my hometown!
我的家乡
我的家乡是位于山西盂县的一个小村庄.它虽然小但非常美丽.
家乡被群山环绕,这些小山甚至比大山川还要美丽.春日里,我们在山巅放飞自制的风筝；夏天里,漫山遍野是长得绿油油的草木,各种野果美味诱人；秋日里,山下和山周围的玉米熟了,我们几乎天天能尝到新鲜的玉米；冬日里,雪花飘飘,大地银妆素裹,我们玩雪,有时还就着糖吃几口干净的白雪.我的家乡天空蔚蓝,空气清新,水儿甜美,人们好客.我爱我的家乡.
My Home Village
My home village is a small one.It’s in Yuxian county of Shanxi Province.Small as it is,it’s very beautiful.
There are many hills around my home village and they are more beautiful than some big mountains.In spring,we can fly kites which are made by ourselves on the top of the hills.The kites fly very high.In summer,the trees are green and the grass is green,too.It is green everywhere on the hills.There are so many wild apple trees on the hills.The wild apples are nice to eat.In autumn,the corns under and around the hills are ripe.So we eat them almost every day.In winter,when it snows,all the ground is covered with snow.We can play with snow and sometimes we eat the clean snow with sugar.In my hometown the sky is blue,the air is clean,the water is sweet and the people are very friendly.I love my hometown!
我的家乡
我的家乡是位于山西盂县的一个小村庄.它虽然小但非常美丽.
家乡被群山环绕,这些小山甚至比大山川还要美丽.春日里,我们在山巅放飞自制的风筝；夏天里,漫山遍野是长得绿油油的草木,各种野果美味诱人；秋日里,山下和山周围的玉米熟了,我们几乎天天能尝到新鲜的玉米；冬日里,雪花飘飘,大地银妆素裹,我们玩雪,有时还就着糖吃几口干净的白雪.我的家乡天空蔚蓝,空气清新,水儿甜美,人们好客.我爱我的家乡.
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