问题描述：
这几个句子的语法,表达是否恰当
1.it is the fact that the educational authority place inadequate emphasis on triditional culture that lead to this situation.
2.it's undermining students' sense of cultural identity,making the next generation abandon our spiritual heritage,forgetting the qualities that've made us who we are.
3.It's imperative to build a new educational system where the youth feel obligated to honor our ancestors,and our triditional culture.
PS：本人语法基础不扎实,做的一篇六级模拟作文,有些地方自己也不确定.对于这几个句子,如果有更好,更地道,更简洁的表达方法,希望前辈们指出.
1.it is the fact that the educational authority place inadequate emphasis on triditional culture that lead to this situation.
2.it's undermining students' sense of cultural identity,making the next generation abandon our spiritual heritage,forgetting the qualities that've made us who we are.
3.It's imperative to build a new educational system where the youth feel obligated to honor our ancestors,and our triditional culture.
PS：本人语法基础不扎实,做的一篇六级模拟作文,有些地方自己也不确定.对于这几个句子,如果有更好,更地道,更简洁的表达方法,希望前辈们指出.
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