请大家帮我鉴定鉴定这篇文章有没有语法之类的错误~

A Good Teacher
It’s important for students to have a good teacher. A good teacher can help us study well. So,（此处最好不要用SO,这样让人觉得上下文不通顺很别扭） how can he or she become a good teacher?
Many students hate taking math lessons, because they’re so boring and difficult that some students even fall asleep. But if your math teacher is a patient and enthusiastic man, （此处应用“,”）perhaps you don’t （最好是will not）feel bored any more. If a teacher’s lessons are very energetic, maybe you’ll fall in love with（fall in love 是相爱哦,你怎么和数学相爱啊?只用love就可以啦） it.
A good teacher also needs patience. （前文已提出patient teacher 此处在强调一遍感觉重复,前文的patient应该去掉）A patient teacher will make students（这里要加be动词,而且要用原型） more confident. With the help of patient teachers（前后主语不一致,有时用单数有时用复数,这样会造成混乱）, the silly students can also become very intelligent.
And teachers with great sense of responsibility also very popular（这句话的谓语在哪里?）. They never give up on （on是多余的give up即可）anybody, and they try their best （尽某人最大的努力不是try somebody`s best 而是make）to improve all the students （缺少表示“的”的撇）grades.
I don’t like teachers who are very strict with students. I think students and teachers should be relaxed（最好用harmony和谐的） with each other.
差不多就是这些了,可能改的比较多,但是都是出自个人意见~!
再问： And teachers with great sense of responsibility also very popular（这句话的谓语在哪里？？？）.不好意思。对于谓语这些名词我不大懂 ，您能帮着改改这一句吗？使意思不变~~谢谢啦~~
再答： And teachers with great sense of responsibility also will be very popular.并且有着极大的责任感的老师们也将会变得十分受欢迎的。或者And the teachers with great sense of responsibility also be popular。去掉将来时用一般时态表示。这样就应该可以了！O(∩_∩)O~