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50分求人帮忙改改英语作文!今天要的!200多字而已!
Our teachers often say :“ You should study hard for your beatiful tomorrow.” So ,what’s the future we turely expect?
My mom likes to tell me some storys about her childhood.It’s a difficult time to live.so she had to work in the farm or do some housework after school.usually they students didn’t have homework to do.Also ,there was not so much Extracurricular books for them to read .my mother thinks her experence can make me understand how perciou study is .
But I have to say ,it’s not easy to compare.Now we don’t have a lot of work to do .but we have plenty homework and test to do .students are tired of classes and papers .some of us dream about being famous by sing or dance .so they can earn money without our konwledge.This is not only caused by Converse but also Pressure.
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.In my opinion,we shouldn't escape from stress but to face it as it is.What we can do is to adapt to the stress and to profit from it rather than to avoid it.Both book knowledge and personal experience are essential.While experience makes one more resourceful,book knowledge makes one more learned.so we should do both learn and activities.
Once we did that wo should have a broght future!
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Our teacher often says,"You should work hard for your bright future." What's the future we truly expect?
My mom likes to tell me stories about her childhood.It was a difficult time to live in.She had to work on the farm adn do housework after school.The students usually didn't have much homework to do.What's more,there wasn't many extracurricular books for them to read.My mother thinks her experience can make me understand how precious studying is.
But I have to say that it isn't easy to compare.We don't have a lot of housework to do now,but we have plenty of homework and tests.Students are tired from classes and papers.Some of us dream about becoming famous by singing or dancing,so they can earn money without academic knowledge.This is not only caused by the reverse phase but also by pressure.
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.In my opinion,we shouldn't escape from stress but should face it as it is.What we can do is to adapt to the stress and to gain from it rather than avoiding it.Both book knowledge and personal expereince are essential.While experience makes one more resourceful,book knowledge makes one more learned.(书本知识也让我们更加resourceful,经验也让我们更learned,用while这种句型我觉得不太合适)So we should both learn and participate in activities.
Once we do this,we should have a bright future.
 
 
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