谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语短文有什么语法错误.

Hello, everyone.
I am an outgoing girl. one of my maint features is a pair of small eyes. My mother always says I laugh eyes with my eye ball unseen,but I don’t think so. There are a lot of people say I am like a Korean. I think no matter what other people say, be a true girl!I also like reading books,because I think I can learn a lot of things from reading. I also like to travel,because travel can make people humble. My hobby is debating, I participated in the school debating tournament in this month . I think the debates can improve my eloquence.
This is me. Do you want to make friends with me?
That’s all. Thank you
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再问： ball unseen查不到什么意思。还有There are a lot of people say I am like a Korean.这里你帮我改的am好像有点 错。我不是说我喜欢韩国而是说有很多人说我像韩国人。能帮我解答吗？
再答： with my eye balls unseen 意为笑起来，眼球就看不见了。。。eye balls眼球的意思。。。 直接说a lot of people say I am like a Korean。。。把 there are去掉。。。。这是我的失误。。。还有问题吗