初三口语自我介绍.介绍我是用中文写的在拿到网上用英汉翻译过来.但总感觉语序有点不对样的,所以请有英

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初三口语自我介绍.介绍我是用中文写的在拿到网上用英汉翻译过来.但总感觉语序有点不对样的,所以请有英
所以请英语好点的大侠们帮我看看这篇文章的语法是对的吗,而且够读一分钟么?
Teacher: good morning, children. I am very pleased today I can stand here to make my self introduction, although I feel a little nervous. But anyway, I believe that my confidence will let everyone believe me! Ok. Now, let me introduce myself to you.
My name is *** enrolled in changsha *****. 14 years old this year. In school, I am a behavior habits good students. Even my achievement is not very good, can not be used with good compared to students. But I am working hard study.
In my spare time, I'd like to listen to music and reading novels. This type of hobby, can not only relaxes me, also enlarged my knowledge. Although I am primary three students, I can arrange their own time and learning with joy.
Finally I want everyone in my family will always healthy, smile everyday!
中文：老师们,早上好.很高兴今天我能站在这里给你们做我的自我介绍,尽管我觉得有些紧张了.但是不管怎样,我相信我的自信将让每个人都相信我! 好了,现在,让我来介绍一下自己.
我叫 *** 就读于长沙市第****.今年14岁.在学校,我是一个行为习惯良好的学生.即使我的成绩不是很好,不能与好学生相比.但是我很努力的学习.
在我的业余时间,我想听音乐和看小说.这一类型的爱好,不仅可以使我感到放松,也扩大我的知识.虽然我是初级三学生,我可以安排自己的时间和学习充满喜悦.
最后我希望我家里的每个人都将永远健康,每天都保持笑容!
还有.如果不够的话我还应该补充点什么内容.特别点的.但是要容易背点的.因为英语确实不好

1个回答分类：英语 2014-10-10

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Good morning teacher and fellow classmates. I am very pleased today to stand before you to make my self introduction today. I feel a little nervous, but I believe that my confidence will have your faith! Now, let me tell you all about me.
My name is *** enrolled in changsha *****. I'm14 years old. At school, I am a good student because I behave well. Even though I don't have very good grades comparing to other students, but I do study very hard.
In my spare time, I like listening to music and reading novels. These hobbies not only relax me, they also allow me to gain knowledge. Although I am only a primary three student, I can balance my time well between learning and having fun.
Finally I want everyone in my family to always have good health and full of laughter everyday!
本来打算用其他颜色来改的, 可惜百度上好像没这个功能.您大致的意思保留了,改动的地方比较多,有需要我解释的就留言吧.
再问：现在应该没有语序错误了吧！
再答：没了。

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