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Q Some people says air travel only benefits rich people.Most average people take no advantages from development of airplane.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Qantas recently has established a new airline between Sydney and Shanghai.In this age,more people can enjoy long distance travel conveniently as a result of the development of air travelling service.Despite this,some regards air travel is only beneficial for those financially advantaged but not the disadvantaged.Personally,I think air travel have brought enormous benefits to both the rich and the poor.
It is undeniable that the cost of air travel is still considerable,and sometime the price of an air ticket for the poor can probably mean all their wages for couple of months.Therefore,compared to the rich,it is reasonably not that simple for the people who just maintain an average level of income to afford the expense of air travel.The reason why people argue that air travel only benefits the financially advantaged is understandable.
In spite of the fact that air travel is relatively expensive,let not forget other benefits it has brought to public,both the rich and the poor.As the advancement of air travel,people have more chances to visit and work in global scope.For those who are not very wealthy but with intellectual skills,foreign labour market can be another career choice.For example,there are more foreign English language tutors in non-English speaking countries and those ESL tutors get better remunerations and that exactly expand their employment opportunities.In addition,because of the progress that air travel has made,the industry of tourism has developed very well in recent years.In other words,there are more job positions have been created to support the development in the industry and people have more career stages to show their talents.Moreover,the air travel industry itself has higher demand of labour force than before as well.More professional flight attendants have been recruited from Air China Airline Company is an optimistic example of that.Subsequently,the growth of global economy has been enhanced.
In conclusion,the development of air travel is a bless.I agree to the view that the cost of air travel is significant,however,the other valuable advantages it has brought to people should not be denied or understated.I believe,with enough caution and awareness,we can all better enjoy air travel and the related further boost of economic growth.
Q Some people says air travel only benefits rich people.Most average people take no advantages from development of airplane.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A
Qantas recently has established a new airline between Sydney and Shanghai.In this age,more people can enjoy long distance travel conveniently as a result of the development of air travelling service.Despite this,some regards air travel is only beneficial for those financially advantaged but not the disadvantaged.Personally,I think air travel have brought enormous benefits to both the rich and the poor.
It is undeniable that the cost of air travel is still considerable,and sometime the price of an air ticket for the poor can probably mean all their wages for couple of months.Therefore,compared to the rich,it is reasonably not that simple for the people who just maintain an average level of income to afford the expense of air travel.The reason why people argue that air travel only benefits the financially advantaged is understandable.
In spite of the fact that air travel is relatively expensive,let not forget other benefits it has brought to public,both the rich and the poor.As the advancement of air travel,people have more chances to visit and work in global scope.For those who are not very wealthy but with intellectual skills,foreign labour market can be another career choice.For example,there are more foreign English language tutors in non-English speaking countries and those ESL tutors get better remunerations and that exactly expand their employment opportunities.In addition,because of the progress that air travel has made,the industry of tourism has developed very well in recent years.In other words,there are more job positions have been created to support the development in the industry and people have more career stages to show their talents.Moreover,the air travel industry itself has higher demand of labour force than before as well.More professional flight attendants have been recruited from Air China Airline Company is an optimistic example of that.Subsequently,the growth of global economy has been enhanced.
In conclusion,the development of air travel is a bless.I agree to the view that the cost of air travel is significant,however,the other valuable advantages it has brought to people should not be denied or understated.I believe,with enough caution and awareness,we can all better enjoy air travel and the related further boost of economic growth.
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