问题描述：
英语作文哦帮我看看怎么样,语法有什么错误不
before our eyes is a picture of a hot pot,in which many cultures have boiled,provided people with not only
Newton but also Leonardo da Vinci and such celebrity as Shakespeare ,Mao Zedong and Zhou Enlai,with a line going like this：cultural hot pot-delicious and nutritious.Simple as the picture cartoon drawing photo,the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.
before our eyes is a picture of a hot pot,in which many cultures have boiled,provided people with not only
Newton but also Leonardo da Vinci and such celebrity as Shakespeare ,Mao Zedong and Zhou Enlai,with a line going like this：cultural hot pot-delicious and nutritious.Simple as the picture cartoon drawing photo,the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.
问题解答：
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我也觉得in which many cultures have boiled 可以改一下.
但楼上貌似没讲清楚,many cultures have boiled in hot pot 怎么接前半段Before our eyes的呢
而且其实还可以再修饰一下,比如：
Before our eyes is the picture of a steaming hotpot ,which is full of vary essences from cultures both at home and abroad,ancient to modern.这样其实就概括性地描述了你例举的这么多例子.
既省下了笔墨、又很精炼.这些人物例子啊,可以在正文具体地讲.开头还是简洁明了为主,主要就是解决“图片描述”.
然后最后一句没什么必要,而且Simple as the picture cartoon drawing photo表达好像有些问题,语法一定要注意啊.
个人认为第一段引出delicious and nuturitious cultural hot pot 就可以了.
如：These diverse ingredients lead to a delicious and nutritious cultural feast .
那么晚才回你,不好意思啊～我一般晚上都会在的～白天有时候在 有时候不在.
再问： Simple as the picture is cartoon drawing photo,the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.这样这个句子对了吗
再答： 你前半句中文想表达什么？我帮你看看
再问： 这个漫画虽然画的简单
再答：
再问： 哈哈 你字比我字好看多了你在做数学吗 我也有几个数学问题你去看看
再答： 数学不咋地，哈哈
再答： 你这篇改好了么
再问： 太谢谢你了
再问： 好啦
再答： 你做高数啊？
再答： 我是高中生哈～不过有自己学学高数，你考研的吧？
再答： 好的呀～哈哈。互补一下
我也觉得in which many cultures have boiled 可以改一下.
但楼上貌似没讲清楚,many cultures have boiled in hot pot 怎么接前半段Before our eyes的呢
而且其实还可以再修饰一下,比如：
Before our eyes is the picture of a steaming hotpot ,which is full of vary essences from cultures both at home and abroad,ancient to modern.这样其实就概括性地描述了你例举的这么多例子.
既省下了笔墨、又很精炼.这些人物例子啊,可以在正文具体地讲.开头还是简洁明了为主,主要就是解决“图片描述”.
然后最后一句没什么必要,而且Simple as the picture cartoon drawing photo表达好像有些问题,语法一定要注意啊.
个人认为第一段引出delicious and nuturitious cultural hot pot 就可以了.
如：These diverse ingredients lead to a delicious and nutritious cultural feast .
那么晚才回你,不好意思啊～我一般晚上都会在的～白天有时候在 有时候不在.
再问： Simple as the picture is cartoon drawing photo,the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.这样这个句子对了吗
再答： 你前半句中文想表达什么？我帮你看看
再问： 这个漫画虽然画的简单
再答：
再问： 哈哈 你字比我字好看多了你在做数学吗 我也有几个数学问题你去看看
再答： 数学不咋地，哈哈
再答： 你这篇改好了么
再问： 太谢谢你了
再问： 好啦
再答： 你做高数啊？
再答： 我是高中生哈～不过有自己学学高数，你考研的吧？
再答： 好的呀～哈哈。互补一下
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