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Today,my dance class has got over,but i don not want it over.sometimes,i want it start again.
when the winter vacation beginning ,i leave school for home .
in my opinion,except the homework i should do something to let myself have good time and lose weight .so i enrol a class of koren dancing .
during this five day,i do a lot of excercise .it is not only intersting but also very makes me tired.
however ,i love it and i will be better
Today,my dance class has got over,but i don not want it over.sometimes,i want it start again.
when the winter vacation beginning ,i leave school for home .
in my opinion,except the homework i should do something to let myself have good time and lose weight .so i enrol a class of koren dancing .
during this five day,i do a lot of excercise .it is not only intersting but also very makes me tired.
however ,i love it and i will be better
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