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My plans for this coming summer vacation
Summer vacation is coming.So I really want to make a plan for this coming summer vacation.Well,first,I'll take exercise everyday,so that I can keep healthy.Second,I'm about to improve my English grades,because my English is very poor.Besides,I'm going to look for a part-time job,so that I can have enough money to buy something useful.I'll also relax myself by watching TV for a short time,for I can learn more knowledges from watching TV.In a word,I think my summer vacation will be very meaningful.
National Day is coming,we are all happy.And I want to take a vacation,I thought about going to Hong Kong.I really wanted to go to Disney Land.I thought about going to Gui Lin,I heard that Gui Lin is very beautiful.But at last,I decided on Li Ding Island.I never go there and I know there is a good place to have fun,I am going there with my mum ,my friend and Aunt Liu,my mother's good friend.We're leaving on Octorber 2th.I am planning to have a good trip:I am going to the beach,going swimming,hiking and sleeping in a tent.I think we will have a good time...
my vacation plans
we are going to have a vacation.it has 25 days off.i will tell you about my vacation plan.my mother often asks me get good grades.i am very distress.if i have good grades.i am gong to finish my homework first.i will play computer games every day.then i’m going to supermarket with my mother.at last,i will a great vacation.if i can’t get good grades,my vacation will very terrible.first,my mother will compel me to study.next,my grandmother will very sad.then my vacation was boring.at last,my mother will very prattle.hum…… hope i will get good grads!
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