英语短文找错!找出本文的错误.顺便加一个结尾,结尾最好有“from home and abroad”这个短语The lo

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英语短文找错!
找出本文的错误.顺便加一个结尾,结尾最好有“from home and abroad”这个短语The long-expected summer holiday finally approached.Everyone in my class has their ideas.Some want to stay at home to relax themselved,others plan to visit their friends and relatives.But I am looking forwad to go to shanghai for a trip.As you know,shanghai is a city with colorfui culture.So I will visit some famous scence spots like Yu Garden and the Bund of shanghai to enlarge my vision.
Secondly,I’ll see all kind of exhibitions inEXPO City.It’s a good chance for me to know diffirent culture throughtout the world.
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总体来说还行..但有几处需要注意..
一 拼写.different not diffirent..
二 搭配 to relax themselved..我们可以用"make them relaxed"..
Everyone in my class has their own ideas..加上own好些..另外looking forwad to go to 中go 改为going..(look forward to doing sth.)
以及all kinds of...
三 句法 Some want to stay at home to relax themselved,others plan to visit their friends and relatives.此句中在others前要加连词如and while(while 好些) ..
 
 
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