那位能帮我看看这篇英语小作文有没有语法错误,

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那位能帮我看看这篇英语小作文有没有语法错误,
Look!This is a photo of my family.The man with glasses is my grandfather.He likes reading the newspaper very much!That woman on the sofa is my grandmother.The young man behind the door is my father.His hobby is watching TV.This woman with blond curly hair is my mother.She is very pretty.Her job is a dentists.The girl next to the mother is my sister.She is very lovely.The girl with straight hair is my friend Tina.She is very friendly.
I have a warm family.I love it very much!
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-10-18

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看报纸直接说read newpaper 就行了,中间不要加the.你爸爸的爱好难道只有一个吗?一般我们都说hobbies,不过你说单个也没问题.还有一个小问题,为啥你全部都说this man/woman is ...with?这是你们要学习的关键句型吗?还可以适当用that的,dentist不用加s,单数.The girl next to my mother,不要说the mother,the 的用法你要注意一下,the mother给人的感觉以为那不是你妈,语法基本上没什么错误,其他都是小问题.
再问: 谢谢~
 
 
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