英语翻译这句话有没错?I love them ,but far away from them.不要BE动词可以么后面半句

不可以,but前后的谓语动词一致时才可以省略!
如:
She cut her knee badly,but didn't cry.她弄伤了膝盖,
但是并没有哭
This restaurant serves cheap but excellent food.
这家餐馆价廉物美.*
He's hard-working,but not very
clever.他很努力,却不大聪明
He was tired but happy after the long walk.
他走了一段很长的路之後,虽然很累但也很愉快.
所以,原文应该是I love them ,but I'm far away from them.