帮我修改一下英语的句子和语法

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帮我修改一下英语的句子和语法
哪位帮我修改一下下面的这段英语有没有语法上的错误,
It is my live,but without you.How is it?i can't answer.i love you over all the things what i can see and what i can feel,even over my live.But,in my live,there is only me.i can see everything but not the girl who i love.You were my best dream but also my worst dream what i everynight have.i'm waiting for you like i'm waiting for the end of my live.
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-03

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I have my life,but I don't have you.How is that?I have no answer.I love you more than anything I see and feel,more than my own life.But in my life there's just me.I have everything but (you) the girl I love.You were my loveliest dream and also my every night's nightmare.I'll be waiting for you till the end of my life./until the day that I die./ as long as I live.
 
 
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