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有哪位大神能帮我改一下英语作文,跪谢啊
There are two charts below. From the first graph, it is apparent from the chart that university of California’s students vote their favourite Quick-Service Restaurant in the city of Los Angeles. Five Guys is the most popular means chosen by students, whose percentage is 7.2%. Five Guys can provide free peanut and fresh meat, so it can attract the largest number of customers. The second most popular is In-N-Out which takes up 5.9, because they have great quality. Moreover, in this questionnaire, there is not a big deal of difference between the percentage of Chick-fil-A and Paner a Bread( the former one is 4.1% and the latter is 4.0%). Meanwhile, there are more chipotle, reaching 2.7%, compared with 1.0% of Panda Express. Besides, the percentage of Taco Bell, Sonic and Wendy’s is the same, and it accounts for 0.4%. Surprisingly, the percentage of Arby’s is more than twice the percentage of McDonald’s, the ration is 0.6% to 0.3%. Finally, the percentage of Subway and Burger King is the lowest, and it takes up 0.1%. Most students think dishes of Subway and Burger King lack variety; Hence, they do not want to go there.
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There are two charts below.From the first graph,it is apparent that the studentsof the University of California voted for their favourite Quick-Service Restaurant in the city of Los Angeles.Five Guys is the most popular means chosen by students,whose percentage is 7.2%.Five Guys can provide free peanut and fresh meat,so it can attract the largest number of customers.The second most popular is In-N-Out which takes up 5.9%,for they have great quality.Moreover,in this questionnaire,there is no great difference between the percentage of Chick-fil-A and Paner a Bread( the former one is 4.1% and the latter is 4.0%).Meanwhile,there are more chipotle,reaching 2.7%,compared with 1.0% of Panda Express.Besides,the percentage of Taco Bell,Sonic and Wendy’s is the same,and it accounts for 0.4%.Surprisingly,the percentage of Arby’s is more than twice the percentage of McDonald’s,the ration is 0.6% to 0.3%.Finally,the percentage of Subway and Burger King is the lowest,and it takes up 0.1%.Most students think that dishes in Subway and Burger King lack variety; Hence,they do not want to go there.
 
 
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