一段英文歌词的语法问题

一段英文歌词的语法问题
The island bathes in the sun’s bright rays
Distant hills wear a shroud of grey
A lonely breeze whispers in the trees
Sole witness to history
Fleeting memories rise
From the shadows of my mind
Sing no more worry - endless corridors
Say no more worry- hopeless warriors
You were there
You were there
Am I forever dreaming
How to define the way I’m feeling
You were there
Countless visions they haunt me in my sleep
You were there
Though forgotten all promises we keep
Slaves to our destiny
I recall a melody
Sing no more worry –through the secret door
Say no more worry – for the things in store
You were there
You were there
Happiness follows sorrow
Only believing in tomorrow
帮忙看看这段歌词的语法有没有什么问题,单词有没有拼写错误,中文意思是否通顺,急用!