求一篇英语作文：My View On College Students' Taking Part-time Job

什么级别的,四级,六级,专四,专八?词汇超纲就不好了
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再答： I'd liketo share with you my view on part-time jobs. I think it a must for students to have part-time jobs on weekends or in the summmer holiday. If we earn the money by ourselves,we 'll not feel pressured when we spend it, It bring us not only indenpendence,but also confidence. What's more,by taking up a part-time job,we feel we are connected with society,and we are easily adapted to society after leaving school. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Part-time Jobs for College Students Nowadays,more and more college students are taking part-time jobs. On this phenomenon, different people hold different viewpoints. Some people think after-school work is beneficial to the students. On the other hand, it helps cultivate indepenence in young people and make them more matrure;on the other hand, students who have part-time jobs can relieve, to some extent,the economic burdens of their parents. But after-school work has brought a lot of problems. For example, part-time jobs often distract students' attention from their studies, so some students have shown a decline in their studies, and some even play truant. As for me, I think the main task of students is to studey hard and learn what is needed for the development of our society. Though students who have part-time jobs may relieve their parents' economic burdens, their early contact with society adds greatly to the worries of their parents. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~