给我纠正一下英语作文的语法错误行么,

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给我纠正一下英语作文的语法错误行么,
There are a lot of the love of my parents,are innumerable,remember also can not finish.However,there is one thing I remember.
One morning,I suddenly feel sick,mom and Dad took me to the hospital.The doctor said I had a high fever,must hit a bit,take some medicine.Although I know injection is painful,I endured the pain.In these days,mom and Dad had a hard time to take care of me:to comfort me,encourage me,take medicine when feeding me medicine,often ask me hungry,thirsty.After these days of mom and Dad take care,my disease improved day by day,
This is a very small thing,but deeply reflects the love of my parents.
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-10-01

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(1)love不可数,且there be句型用就近原则,所以第一句的are改为is 如下:There is a lot of the love of my parents.
(2)逗号前后的东西可有修饰关系,所以第二句中的are可以去掉直接使用形容词 如下:innumerable
(3) 逗号前后的东西一定要有联系,故第三句的 remember 动词原形不能对单独使用,如2所说需要表修饰,且这里为主动记住 如下:remembering also can not finish.
(4)Mum大写
(5)删去of mom and Dad take care,
(6)improve 为提高的意思 disease 为疾病的意思 故最后两句不能说疾病一天一天地提高 所以改为 如下:My disease left me a way day by day【我的病一天天离我更远了】
 
 
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