问题描述：
对英语演讲的点评
主要有以下优点：穿着正式,准备充分,poster做的漂亮,有自信,缺点：eye contact ,tone,body language,pronunciation,no feeling ,no passion,no facial expression
演讲中没有语法错误，尤其其中一个男孩讲的非常好，他演讲的开头很好，而且很幽默，演讲有激情，并且和观众有很好的眼神交流并且在演讲中有适当的肢体语言
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It's terrific to see you dress formally and well prepared for the speech,and your poster is well done as well.
however,you need to make more eye contact with the audience and better speak with various tones and clear pronunciation.I have to say you are a bit stiff without proper body language,which is no good for impressing the audience and the jury.Moreover,I really hope you can put more passion into the speech and try to enrich it with more facial expression,then surely your speech would be fabulous.
演讲中没有语法错误,尤其其中一个男孩讲的非常好,他演讲的开头很好,而且很幽默,演讲有激情,并且和观众有很好的眼神交流并且在演讲中有适当的肢体语言
your grammar is ok.It's worth mentioning that a boy gave a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning,furthermore,he was fairly humorous and enthusiastic throughout the speech,and he made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the speech.
可以了吧 适当再加分吧 很辛苦的
