they can also go there by car.it is fast and cheap,but you w

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they can also go there by car.it is fast and cheap,but you will get into a traffic jam.
作文写完了以后觉得这句话怪怪的,上来问一句:这句话有没有语病?(首字母没大写什么的忽略就好了=v=)求高手指点啊……
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they can also go there by car. it is fast and cheap,but they may get into a traffic jam.
我改了两个词:1、是you改成they,我觉得前后的主语应该保持一致,就不会显得逻辑混乱;2、是will改成may,我觉得堵车不是必然,只是有这种可能性!
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