Better habilts,Better life

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Better habilts,Better life
We have all sorts of bad habits in our lives .My bad habits is always being careless .It has a great effect .For example, I often forget to bring my homework because I pack my schoolbag carelessly .It’s also common for me to misunderstand the questions during the tests since I read them without carefulness. But I’m trying to get rid of my bad habit. I’ ll check my schoolbag before I go to school to make sure I don’t forget anything. Its also a good idea for me to read every word with great care in order not to make any mistakes. In one word, Carelessness is my bad habit and Ill try my best to come over it .
请问老师,这是我写的作文,但总感觉到有点问题,1、是否符合题目要求 2 语法是否正确 3、是否存在 其他问题 4、改进方法 。谢谢
1个回答 分类:英语 2015-05-03

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解题思路: 要把好的习惯也多说一点,坏的习惯适当去掉几句话,你的题目是---Better habilts,Better life ,所以两方面要有所侧重。
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要把好的习惯也多说一点,坏的习惯适当去掉几句话,你的题目是---Better habilts,Better life ,所以两方面要有所侧重。
We have all sorts of bad habits in our lives .My bad habits (单数)is always being careless .It has a great effect .For example, I often forget to bring my homework because I pack my schoolbag carelessly .It’s also common for me to misunderstand the questions during the tests,since (换成and)and I read them without carefulness. But I’m trying to get rid of my bad habit. I’ll check my schoolbag before I go to school to make sure I don’t forget anything. Its(It's) also a good idea for me to read every word with great care in order not to make any mistakes. In one word, Carelessness is my bad habit and Ill(I'll) try my best to come over it.
My bad habits (单数)is always being careless -----也可以改成:One of my bad habits is always careless for every thing.
参考: We have all sorts of bad habits in our lives .My bad habit is always being careless.It has a great effect.For example, I often forget to bring my homework because I pack my schoolbag carelessly .It’s also common for me to misunderstand the questions during the tests since I read them without carefulness. But I’m trying to get rid of my bad habit. I’ ll check my schoolbag before I go to school to make sure I don’t forget anything. It's also a good idea for me to read every word with great care in order not to make any mistakes. In one word, Carelessness is my bad habit and I'll try my best to come over it .
Keep good habits is important for us.Good habits help people to benefint for life and can make us get a great success.
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