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请帮忙改下这篇雅思作文 相信好人有好报~时态和语法错误有哪些 并给个雅思分
1罪犯应该应该长期监禁还是应该再教育,并在他们重新进入社会时,做一些社区服务使他们改过自新
Meatures tanken for criminal offenders are crucial ones ,especially for the health and peacec in the seciety .which ways adopt to ,to be re-educated or with lengthy jail terms,has a slightly divarication to some extent.Although i understand the main points of some decision-maker about keeping crimals in prison in long term ,however,i do not believe it is the best or only way for those who commit crimes,and re-education and rehabilitation through labor seems more proper without considering some special case .
Through re-education ,offenders are given a chance to reflection on what had they done wongly and that can mend their ways .Re-education ,especially some skills course,is conducive to adapt the society and earn their living for some ones with poor educational level .
In addition,similar to community service programmers ,rehabilitated using is a good means of making full use of social resource and integrate structure of labour power .
Admittedly,implementing the re-education on violators have some potential problems .They may commit crimes again .to be more specific,some criminals who have abnormal and evil values and undergo certain physical and mental pains' experience are dangerous for residents in the service community where the offends service though labour such as burglary and theft.
Overall,i believe that if people regard as the offenders without bias and prejudice and encourage them get a re-education and rehabilitation before reintroduced to society,the society will get more and more stable and the criminal rates will be less and less low.
错了一个单词 第一个单词是measures 手段 peace 和平 呵呵 写错了 rehabilitation through labor 劳动改造 是吴建业的写作书里的核心词汇 其他我会改 崔泽宇朋友 还有朋友能帮忙看看吗?
1罪犯应该应该长期监禁还是应该再教育,并在他们重新进入社会时,做一些社区服务使他们改过自新
Meatures tanken for criminal offenders are crucial ones ,especially for the health and peacec in the seciety .which ways adopt to ,to be re-educated or with lengthy jail terms,has a slightly divarication to some extent.Although i understand the main points of some decision-maker about keeping crimals in prison in long term ,however,i do not believe it is the best or only way for those who commit crimes,and re-education and rehabilitation through labor seems more proper without considering some special case .
Through re-education ,offenders are given a chance to reflection on what had they done wongly and that can mend their ways .Re-education ,especially some skills course,is conducive to adapt the society and earn their living for some ones with poor educational level .
In addition,similar to community service programmers ,rehabilitated using is a good means of making full use of social resource and integrate structure of labour power .
Admittedly,implementing the re-education on violators have some potential problems .They may commit crimes again .to be more specific,some criminals who have abnormal and evil values and undergo certain physical and mental pains' experience are dangerous for residents in the service community where the offends service though labour such as burglary and theft.
Overall,i believe that if people regard as the offenders without bias and prejudice and encourage them get a re-education and rehabilitation before reintroduced to society,the society will get more and more stable and the criminal rates will be less and less low.
错了一个单词 第一个单词是measures 手段 peace 和平 呵呵 写错了 rehabilitation through labor 劳动改造 是吴建业的写作书里的核心词汇 其他我会改 崔泽宇朋友 还有朋友能帮忙看看吗?
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