问题描述: 初一英语作文 找错谢谢 1个回答 分类:英语 2014-10-26 问题解答: 我来补答 emember one go 改成remember one day windy是形容词改为wind,sun was warm 不对,应该是the weather was warm.Fly a kite make us.这句话不对,不是祈使句,动词不能当主语,fly改成flying.在倒数第三行中间的always前加she,when I sad 改成when I am sad .而且文章不够流畅,转折太快 展开全文阅读