1:I went to the Forest Park with my old friend this Thursday.Although it was hot,we had a wonderful time there.We played a lot,such as corsair,bumper cars,Arabian Flying Blanket and so on.We felt excited indeed.That day was also my friend’s birthday.I bought a comic strip for her because she likes cartoon very much.She also invited me to her new flat to play.At last she gave me a heart made of crystal.She really moved me.
2：Last Saturday HP6 had just come out.And many Harry Potter fans went to buy it.I did’t buy it because it was too expensive,but I downloaded it on the Internet.It was in English.Many people went on translating as soon as the book came out.I also took part in it and became a part of the translating group.From this group,I first realized that my English was so poor.I needed to look up in the dictionary all the time.It was really troublesome.But I withheld and withheld.I had translated many paragraphs.I was the youngest among the translators,but I didn’t feel there was much pressure.This work was hard but I really felt happy.We had already finish
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