问题描述：
我写一封信给外国人,希望各位能帮帮忙检查,
查语病，不通顺。
冒犯他国风俗或圣诞节礼仪常识？
Dear Santa,
Merry Christmas!
I'm happy to write to you!
I come from another country.We speak English as our second language.So my English isn't so good,please forgive me.
When I was young,I often heard the Christmas Story.And I think I can see you and your reindeer fly in the sky one day.So every year when Christmas comes,I always hang Christmas stockings at the beside of my bed.What makes me happy is whenever I wake up,I always receive presents which I want.I think it is given by you,dear Santa!So I'm writing to thank you.I don't tell you what I want this year,I hope you can guess what!But I still hope that you can send me a little gift before Christmas when you write back to me,such as a card,a little book,etc.
This is my first time to write to a Santa.I imagine you in a hut in the forest,sit next to the reindeer,and read my letter!I hope hearing from you soon!I wish that in the new year,you can live happy!(Sincerely.
查语病，不通顺。
冒犯他国风俗或圣诞节礼仪常识？
Dear Santa,
Merry Christmas!
I'm happy to write to you!
I come from another country.We speak English as our second language.So my English isn't so good,please forgive me.
When I was young,I often heard the Christmas Story.And I think I can see you and your reindeer fly in the sky one day.So every year when Christmas comes,I always hang Christmas stockings at the beside of my bed.What makes me happy is whenever I wake up,I always receive presents which I want.I think it is given by you,dear Santa!So I'm writing to thank you.I don't tell you what I want this year,I hope you can guess what!But I still hope that you can send me a little gift before Christmas when you write back to me,such as a card,a little book,etc.
This is my first time to write to a Santa.I imagine you in a hut in the forest,sit next to the reindeer,and read my letter!I hope hearing from you soon!I wish that in the new year,you can live happy!(Sincerely.
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