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My favourite hero 英语作文,帮我批改一下
Jian ming- wang has a round face and dark hair .He is the horner of taiwan.
when he was a boy,he was vrey interested in baseball.so he enjoy in school team as a pitcher.his parents didn't want him to be a player,but he didn't want to give up.he kept practing his pitching .and gradually got better.
now he is a strating pitcher fot U.S mojor league baseball team new york .he has become a sports hero througnout the rest of the worle.he is my favourite hero!
He is a sport hero!he is not a star!
Jian ming- wang has a round face and dark hair .He is the horner of taiwan.
when he was a boy,he was vrey interested in baseball.so he enjoy in school team as a pitcher.his parents didn't want him to be a player,but he didn't want to give up.he kept practing his pitching .and gradually got better.
now he is a strating pitcher fot U.S mojor league baseball team new york .he has become a sports hero througnout the rest of the worle.he is my favourite hero!
He is a sport hero!he is not a star!
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