单句改错,每句有一处错误

1.Hope（这里改成Wish,表祝愿） you great success in your work!
2.All you can do is encouraging him,show（这里加ing） him understanding and offer him advice.
3.In（这里改成On） Friday afternoon some students took part in a speech activity.
4.In （这里加a） few weeks the story was returned to her
5.It was very fine when I got up early on（这里删掉on） last Sunday morning
6.I rushed out （这里加上of） the house as quickly as I could
Dear Mrs.Winthorp,
So my first week at college is over!No lectures this morning so I think I'd（这里改成I'll） email you and let you know what（这里改成how） things are going .
I'm glad to say that anything（改成everything) has worked out fine in the dorm.I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find（改成found) me a comfortable one on （加上the） second floor.There are two girls from my course here and I plan（改成am planning）to make friend（这里加上s） with them so they we can help each other on the course work.Everyone else seems very nice and warmly（这里删掉ly） here.
Well,I had better to（这里删掉to） stop now.I'm going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon,for I've got some preparation（这里加上s） to make,keep in touch.