as far as I am concerned,xxxx is important. First, students would have more opportunity to see different things and know more about our world.(后面说一下你可以学到什么,例如自然奥秘,社会历史一类的稍微扩展下） XXXX is not only beneficial for their body, but also for their mind.（后面说下对我的好处例如开阔了视野,使我更加智慧看问题更加成熟.）What’s more, XXXX leads to involvement and involvement leads to enthusiasm and more response, which is very important for a student who is pursuing a better future.
不能老让别人帮忙写,自己也要动动脑筋.
