看一看我的英语作文有没有语法错误.

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看一看我的英语作文有没有语法错误.
When running toward goals,people may meet with many obstacles in their life.I also have such experiments.2 years ago,my best object was going aboard to study.At that time,the financial difficulty was the biggest obstacle for me.My parents couldn’t perfectly afford the expense studying aboard.So I hardly worked part-time job,save enough money that it will be spent by living expenses in china.After,I fortunately was selected from the many applications who wished to go to UIBE as exchange students in college.Finally,I could be came to China and reached my goals.
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-19

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1、meet是及物动词直接接宾语就行,with 去掉
2、experiments改为experiences
3、was going aboard改为was to go aboard
4、financial一次太正式,一般用于经济学,这里可以考虑改为money
5、hardly意思是“几乎不”,表否定意义,这句可改为“i had to do part-time job very hard"
6、After不能单独使用,这里可用Later代替
7、去掉could be
 
 
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