英语好的童鞋能帮我看看这篇短文的语法吗?

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英语好的童鞋能帮我看看这篇短文的语法吗?
My friend mike is a Movie fan,he likes movies very much.We often go to movies on weekends.He likes all kinds of movies,but action movies are his favorite.He likes the famous actor Jackie Chen because he thinks Jakie Chen is not only cool but also hardworking.He act all his movies cannily.Jakie Chen has acted lots of great movies,such as Baby Plan and Rush Hour.Mike likes Baby Plan best,he thinks it’s very funny and successful.But he doesn’t like thrilles because they are too scary,he can’t go to sleep at night.I don’t like them ,too.So we always see action movies.Do you like action movies?If yes,let' see them together!
主要是有没有语法错误,尤其是最后一句话

1个回答分类：英语 2014-10-29

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My friend mike is a fan of Movie ,and(逗号后应该加适当连词) he likes movies very much.We often go to see(这里to后不可以直接接名词要加个动词) movies on weekends.He likes all kinds of movies,but active movies are his favorite.He likes the famous actor Jackie Chen,because he thinks Jakie Chen is not only cool but also hardworking.He acts all his movies cannily.Jakie Chen has acted lots of great movies,such as (电影名应该加引号或者用大写)'Baby Plan' ,'Rush Hour' and so on(用这个句式比较好).Mike likes the(专有名词前加定冠词) 'Baby Plan' best,(适当连词)because he thinks it’s very funny and successful.But he doesn’t like thrilles because they are too scary to (too…to…句型表示太……以至于不能……你那样说太繁琐了）fall asleep（这个短语表示入睡,更能表达你要表达的意思） at night.I don’t like them ,too.So we always see active movies.Do you like active movies?If you do,let's see them together!
差不多就这样了.你这作文没什么亮点,感觉是小学或初一小孩子的作文,没有长难句也没有地道的短语.建议你平时多看看美剧,多读一些英语精短美文.我是新东方老师,我们新东方有本《生为而赢》你到网上下来背背,之后会有很大帮助.手机帮你改的没太仔细,而且没帮你变成长难句,感觉那样就不像你写的了,基本没什么大问题了.还是要多听多背多看.

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