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Recently a survey on”To whom do you go when in trouble?”was made among high school students.58% of them turn to classmates and friends to share their troubles,while 33% of them choose to tell their thoughts to teachers or parents.Only 9% students depend on themselves even in trouble.It can easily draw to the conclusion that students are willing to turn to those who(这里用who可以挖?)are around them for help.
On one hand,classmates and friends are at the same age,so they may have been in a similar situation where you are in trouble now.On the other hand,teachers and parents are older than us.They must have more experience then us.There’s no doubt that they can analyze the situation more calmly and give some useful advice on it.
As has been noted,we may sometimes have no ability to solve the problem all on our own.Why not turn to the people we trust in?Communicate with others frequently,and you will avoid some unnecessary mistakes.
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Recently a survey on”To whom do you go when in trouble?”was made among high school students.58% of them turn to classmates and friends to share their troubles,while 33% of them choose to tell their thoughts to teachers or parents.Only 9% students depend on themselves even in trouble.It can easily draw to the conclusion that students are willing to turn to those who(这里用who可以挖?)are around them for help.
On one hand,classmates and friends are at the same age,so they may have been in a similar situation where you are in trouble now.On the other hand,teachers and parents are older than us.They must have more experience then us.There’s no doubt that they can analyze the situation more calmly and give some useful advice on it.
As has been noted,we may sometimes have no ability to solve the problem all on our own.Why not turn to the people we trust in?Communicate with others frequently,and you will avoid some unnecessary mistakes.
不要光改语法呀==什么文章结构的。
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