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My favourite great book is Three Days to See written by Helen Keller.This book impressed me.It told me how lucky we are.Helen had a serious illness when she was nineteen months.Although she survived from the illness,she was unable to see and hear.She was in a fret at the beginning.But with the help of Sullivan ,she surmounted the difficulties .At last,she became a successful person.
My favourite scene in the book is when Helen imagined three days to see.She said “Oh,how many things I can see if I had the power of sight for just three days!”we can see,how precious it was for Helen Keller.But ,I think that people can realize the importance of the sight and sound only after they have personally expericenced the dark and silence life.
Helen is the hero of the story,but there are other important characters.Sullivan is a patient teacher and she gave her love to Helen,she let Helen have confidence and help her get out of darkness days.
The themes of the book are to do with persistence and life.It describes
how Helen spent the dark and silence life.Finally,it talks about the meaning of life and how to spend our life meaningful.
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只要你认为可以改进的。都可以说。
什么句式,内容。都可以
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My favourite great book is Three Days to See written by Helen Keller.This book impressed me.It told me how lucky we are.Helen had a serious illness when she was nineteen months.Although she survived from the illness,she was unable to see and hear.She was in a fret at the beginning.But with the help of Sullivan ,she surmounted the difficulties .At last,she became a successful person.
My favourite scene in the book is when Helen imagined three days to see.She said “Oh,how many things I can see if I had the power of sight for just three days!”we can see,how precious it was for Helen Keller.But ,I think that people can realize the importance of the sight and sound only after they have personally expericenced the dark and silence life.
Helen is the hero of the story,but there are other important characters.Sullivan is a patient teacher and she gave her love to Helen,she let Helen have confidence and help her get out of darkness days.
The themes of the book are to do with persistence and life.It describes
how Helen spent the dark and silence life.Finally,it talks about the meaning of life and how to spend our life meaningful.
帮我改一下.什么语病 用词不当 格式 之类的
有什么可以改的。都没关系,
只要你认为可以改进的。都可以说。
什么句式,内容。都可以
我希望能让这篇文章更好
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