dear ...
good morning（afternoon..）.first of all,i'd like to all of you a question:do you want to be successful?exercuse me if i'm wrong,but i'm guessing the answers of all may be the same after all,and that'd be "yes,i do".since we all wanted the same destination,how come some of us were never there,some of us were far ahead leading,and some of us were lost in the middle way?that's because we all took different roads,and made all different extents of efforts.and this explains excellently why only a few of us made to the end,outshined others and were successful.
to be a success,one should ,first of all,be diligent,which means a lot of working and less sleeping or playing.only intusdrious people can be successful,yet not all succcessful ones
are intustrious.as Edison says ,genius,is one hundred percent of inspiration and ninety-nine percent of perspiration.it is also of great importance that one chooses a right road.the road that suits you,the road that benifits the society,the road that do good to all the human beings.the road you choose distinguishes you from others,it makes you sublime or vulgar,superstar or ordinary people.so make sure you choose the road carefully.then,it comes to persistence,and this is where most people fall through.whoever makes it to the end must'v got some serious perseverance that others don't have.so other people just worship their succuss,regreting themselves early quitting deeply and heartly yet it changes nothing.
there're many factors that can effect one's success,those three above are the basic ones.and if we can assure these ones,then at the very least we still have a shot at success.otherwise success would be like fish in the air,of course you'll never get there.因为你说的演讲,所以我写的口语化,押韵一些啊
