【温馨提示】：上面的同学从第一句就开始错了,she more say more excited
是典型的中国式英语,是错误的,语法也不对,excited 是形容词,怎么能修饰动词say呢.不过,楼主应该感谢这些网友,因为他们回答问题很积极热情,真的.
翻译如下,准确度有保证
1.她越说越激动
The longer she talked ,the more excited she got. (got也可用was代替)
2.大学一毕业,他就开始找工作
He began to look for a job when he graduated .
3.赢得全校师生尊敬的最佳途径就是努力学习、得高分
The best way to win respect from all the studets and teachers of the school
is to work hard and got a high score .
4.很难记住每个人的长相和名字
It is difficult to remember everyone’s looks and names
5.你们应当特别注意保持健康
You should pay special attention to keeping healthy .
（to 是介词,keep 要改成keeping ）
6.在暑假里他大部分时间都用来上网
He spent most of his time surfing the Internet during the summer holiday.
7.和他多谈几次你会发现他不像你想想得那么坏
You will find him not to be so bad as you think when when you talk with him for more times .
8.我很遗憾地通知你我校的图书馆下星期将停止开放
I am sorry to tell you that the library of our school will stop opening next week .
9.David是我见过的最热心助人的学生之一
David is the most warm-hearted student I have seen .
10.尽管这工作很有挑战性,可我喜欢
Though the work\job is very challenging ,I like it .
有什么不理解的地方,可以再问我.
