英语翻译新加入一家公司,开始在一个部门学习了3个多月,现在要转入另一个部门,要讲一小段话,请帮忙看一下该说什么,并帮忙改

I have already been in xx company for three months. I am very honored to work at the Finance Department during this time. I got to learn many things from all of you even in this short period of time, so I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude to everyone. Thank you!
And yes, as Mr. Jason just mentioned I will take the controlling work(这个能给以下中文吗?觉得不太对劲）. It's a challenging but fascinating thing to be able to start my new work in xx. I sincerely hope that we will strive together to develop our corporation. Thank you for your support in advance.
再问： 1）I will take the controlling work， 我将要做controlling的工作 2）It's a challenging but fascinating thing， fascniating 合适吗，是不是换成good
再答： good当然可以⋯⋯这是我是像您通篇用词的话在新加坡同胞面前还是稍微高级一些更好嘛.. 然后controlling的话我实在不太了解不过大概是可以这样用。