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Today is Sunday ,I play in the park ,I smell to the flowers and listen to the birds ,I play with the bltterflys .I play in the bole too ,the waters are clean ,the airs are fresh ,the fishs are play in the water .I watch the tree and say ,this is so big and tall ,I like this day very much ,how do you tink today is a happy day
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