2010年英语高考作文

问题描述:

Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. After Lunch, I went to the train station and bought two tickets for them. In the evening, I packed the clothes sun glasses an umbrella and a map into the suitcase. These are the things they need. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. 请老师按照高考标准评判,并详细注明扣分原因,谢谢!
1个回答 分类:英语 2010-08-28

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解题过程:
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. After Lunch, I went to the train station and bought two tickets for them. In the evening, I packed the clothes sun glasses, an umbrella and a map into the suitcase. These are the things they need. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. 文章写的很好,几乎没有错误,接近范文,给分19分,如果加强练习的话,你有望高考英语作文拿满分哟!祝优秀的你天天快乐!!
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