求英语高手,这篇文章的语法对吗?（快,很赶）

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求英语高手,这篇文章的语法对吗?（快,很赶）
Mothers day
A man stopped at a flower shop to order some flowers to be wired to his mother who lived two hundred miles away.
As he got out of his car he noticed a young girl sitting on the curb sobbing.
He asked her what was wrong and she replied,"I wanted to buy a red rose for my mother.
But I only have seventy-five cents,and a rose costs two dollars."
The man smiled and said,"Come on in with me.I'll buy you a rose."
He bought the little girl her rose and ordered his own mother's flowers.
As they were leaving he offered the girl a ride home.
She said,"Yes,please!You can take me to my mother."
She directed him to a cemetery,where she placed the rose on a freshly dug grave.
The man returned to the flower shop,canceled the wire order,picked up a bouquet and drove the two hundred miles to his mother's house.
一个男人在花店门口停了下来,想定一束花并用快递寄给在200米外的母亲.
当他下车的时候发现一个小女孩坐在路边
他问她发生什么事,和小女孩回答说：我想为我的妈妈买一束玫瑰花,但是我只有75便士,但是一支玫瑰要2美元
这个男人微笑说：跟我来,我来帮你买
他为小女孩买了玫瑰并开始定他自己的花
当他们离开时,他送小女孩回家
小女孩说：你可以把它给我的母亲.
她指向着墓地,然后她把花放在了母亲干净的坟墓上
这个男人回到了花店,取消了快递
和开车去他母亲家

1个回答分类：综合 2014-12-02

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这是比较有名且有爱的一篇文章,原文本身肯定是没有问题的啊,你要问什么?
再问： A man stopped at a flower shop to order some flowers to be wired to his mother who lived two hundred miles away. 我好像觉得to his mother who lived two 这个who怪怪地。。我不知道对不对。。 He bought the little girl her rose and ordered his own mother's flowers 这里的little girl her rose 也好像怪怪地，看起来好像不太通顺，所以我就想问一下。
再答： his mother who lived 定语从句，关系代词who在定从里做主语 He bought （the little girl某人）（her rose某物） buy sb.sth=buy sth for sb 买给某人某物你是理解不了her吗？什么叫“她的玫瑰”？就是“她所要求的那朵玫瑰” 这文章没问题.........
再问：喔，谢啦谢啦，因为我只是一个初一的学生。。
再答：超出你的范围了，不过这文章本身没有问题的，定从要到初二接触，初三才正式讲（人教版教材），buy的那个用法，应该快要学到了，还有别的觉得不通的地方吗？
再问： Come on in with me。 She said, "Yes, please! You can take me to my mother 还有这两句。谢谢你了。
再答： Come 动词“来”原型，祈使句开头，是这个句子的核心 on副词，此处表“鼓励对方发生动作” in 副词，进到（花店）里面 with me 和我一起那个男人笑着说：“来，跟我一块儿进来...........” Come on in是口语中比较常见的用法，如果仅仅表示“进来”，不用on也可以，加上就是有感情色彩的“（别怕），（快）进来”这种语气的 She said, "Yes, please! You can take me to my mother 这句要结合上文中提到的，那个男人主动提出载她回家（he offered the girl a ride home）然后小女孩说：“好吧，麻烦你带我到我妈妈那儿”

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