帮忙检查以下是否有语法错误

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帮忙检查以下是否有语法错误
Honorable friends ,guests ,you be fine!
On the celebration on the occasion of my parents age of 40,the banquet distinguished guest expresses my parents I am represented to coming to presence welcoming the most sincere gratitude of sum enthusiastically!Our every one present owns self respectable parents,but,today,I can tell everybody proudly,I have one lovable mother amiable and respectable and the greatest father of in the world!They drink a bitter cup the field brings me up ,use their kind instruction and very much loving sight to be illuminating my crying my laughing at.Love of feeling of tired parents of parents’ bitter parents,I will be difficult to repay all self's life.
ok.我就知道有很多问题因为是用自动翻译的。下面是中文
尊敬的各位朋友、来宾,晚上好!
致辞我父母不惑之年的庆典之日,我代表我的父母对前来光临宴会的嘉宾表示热烈的欢迎和最最诚挚的谢意!我们在场的每一位都拥有自己可敬的父母,然而,今天,我可以骄傲地告诉大家,我有一位可亲可敬可爱的母亲和世界上最伟大的父亲!他们含辛茹苦地将我抚养成人,用他们亲切的教诲和深爱的目光照耀着我的哭我的笑。父母的苦父母的累父母的情父母的爱,我将终身难以报答。
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-10-19

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You be fine is very odd.For greeting just "good morning" or so will do.
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Actually there is a lot of grammar errors in the passage and frankly speaking i don't really understand what you are trying to deliver...
Hopefully my words didn't offend you.Maybe you could post the Chinese version of your speech up here so that i could help you translate accurately.
 
 
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