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Hello everyone.Welcome to her blog.
About her
　　Her name is Anna.She is from Germany.She is 11 years old.She is tall and thin.She has long hear.
　　She lives with her family in a house close to some mountains.Her mum is an Art teacher.Her dad is a doctor.She has an elder sister and an elder brother.
About her school and her hobbies
　　Ever day,She go to school by school bus.Her favorite subjects are Maths,Art and Science.She likes her school because the teachers are all very friendly.Her dream is to be an engineer
　　She likes many sports.She is good at swimming and playing basketball.There are her favorite hobbies.
　　She want to make friends with young people from all over the world!Email her,Please!
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