一篇英文写作,请英文好的朋友帮我修改一下.

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一篇英文写作,请英文好的朋友帮我修改一下.
According to the latest data from theMinistry of Water Resources of P.R China,there are more than 600 varioussized cities.More than 400 of them are lack of water,thereof 108 cities arewith serious situation of water shortage.Besides the cities,the watershortage have been starting occurrence in the broad rural area.
The river annual runoff amount in ourcountry is 2.7 trillion cubic meters,it is sixth in the world.It belongs to acountry which is rich in water resources in the world.But time distributionand spatial distribution of water resources are seriously uneven.From theregional distribution,the water of the Eastern is more than the westerns andthe Sothern’s is more than the northing’s.
In addition to specific geographicalconditions and weather conditions,water shortage is intensified as a result ofeconomic growth,population increase,and expansion of development andconstruction activities and ineffective protection of natural resourcesthroughout Chinese Mainland.
Development and utilization of rivers haveexceeded 30%-40% of International Ecological Warning Line and ecological wateris occupied in such a large amount that over-exploitation underground water andman-made sabotage of water resources take place in urban and rural areas.
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1.According to the latest data from the Ministry of Water Resources of P.R China,there are more than 600 various sized cities.你想表达不同大小的城市么?那么就说“600 cities of various sizes”
2.More than 400 of them are lack of water,thereof 108 cities arewith serious situation of water shortage.Besides the cities,the watershortage have been starting occurrence in the broad rural area.
这部分错误蛮多的.首先 lack的用法,如果直接用作动词的话 就是“More than 400 of them lack water.”就可以了.后面一句你是想说缺水问题已经开始在广大乡村地区产生了对吧,注意单复数,改成“the watershortage has occurred in...” 简单点吧.
3.The river annual runoff amount in our country is 2.7 trillion cubic meters,it is sixth in the world.修改:The annual river runoff amount in our country is ...It ranks the sixth in the world.
 
 
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