问题描述:
英语病句修改
This is the school after the first time that I sincerely love everything here.
Love the people here,love the warm and friendly here.
For the first time began to recall with nostalgia the school has not yet completed.
This makes me even more do not know what course to follow.
Day by day,time passed by
The national day is coming
While in study,consider their own fate.
Really tangled very confused.
However,learning is always the most important thing,
POSTER teacher let me endless frustration.
But surprisingly,I treat it carefully.
We used two studies up writing my SOCIAL POSTER and the topic was CHINESE IDENTITY.
all of the social class are full of ss posters
I suddenly found our school is so beautiful
Even the cafeteria,the play ground
The sky on our school
The way to school
In this way,life in an orderly manner over a month.
A month of thought and sentiment.
A month of growing and experiences.
A month of tangled and suffering.
Finally I decided to stay here.
Because,I can not live without the people here who are enthusiasm and friendly.I can not live without my good friends and teachers here.
Even though I know there are going to be a lot of
Even though I knew right away there will be a lot of people throwing us left.
Because I know the future we will together face more difficulties and challenges.
Our future will be far apart cheering each other.
We still have a lot of good agreement and plans.
We will definitely live up to.
Because we have now done the first step:
Even though far apart and then do not forget themselves to each other also.
These wonderful vision and goals are our motivation.
We are made to pay all the sacrifice and are aimed at our common ideals and happiness.
And everyone here appreciates the hardships and happiness.
I know that our school will become more beautiful,
The sky will become more blue.
几乎每句话都是病句、有哪位能帮忙改一下?
This is the school after the first time that I sincerely love everything here.
Love the people here,love the warm and friendly here.
For the first time began to recall with nostalgia the school has not yet completed.
This makes me even more do not know what course to follow.
Day by day,time passed by
The national day is coming
While in study,consider their own fate.
Really tangled very confused.
However,learning is always the most important thing,
POSTER teacher let me endless frustration.
But surprisingly,I treat it carefully.
We used two studies up writing my SOCIAL POSTER and the topic was CHINESE IDENTITY.
all of the social class are full of ss posters
I suddenly found our school is so beautiful
Even the cafeteria,the play ground
The sky on our school
The way to school
In this way,life in an orderly manner over a month.
A month of thought and sentiment.
A month of growing and experiences.
A month of tangled and suffering.
Finally I decided to stay here.
Because,I can not live without the people here who are enthusiasm and friendly.I can not live without my good friends and teachers here.
Even though I know there are going to be a lot of
Even though I knew right away there will be a lot of people throwing us left.
Because I know the future we will together face more difficulties and challenges.
Our future will be far apart cheering each other.
We still have a lot of good agreement and plans.
We will definitely live up to.
Because we have now done the first step:
Even though far apart and then do not forget themselves to each other also.
These wonderful vision and goals are our motivation.
We are made to pay all the sacrifice and are aimed at our common ideals and happiness.
And everyone here appreciates the hardships and happiness.
I know that our school will become more beautiful,
The sky will become more blue.
几乎每句话都是病句、有哪位能帮忙改一下?
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