写作文ON THEWEATHERIS .I"M WHEN【当】 IFEEL BECAYSEWHAT A DAY!我是六年

on Monday,the weather is really bad.it is rainy all day.i am washing my face when the rain starts.i feel so upset,because i can not play football with my friends.What a unlucky day!
不知道楼主有没有学习过过去式,而且从题干来看都是一般现在时,所以我保持了这种时态,但是语法上来说是不正确的.若希望改过来,
再问： 我就照你这样写了。对不对呀！？
再答： 如果你学过过去式，可以改成 On Monday, the weather was really bad. It was rainy all day. I was washing my face when the rain started. I felt so upset, because i can not play football with my friends. What a unlucky day! 如果没学过的话，我觉得就应该没啥问题了，我觉得用过去式更好，但是如果没学过反而露馅了